haiku is great for disjointed minds

pipelineyou can’t win it all
watch out for consequences
i thought i told you

pushing up, baby
look at you, changing the world
one step at a time

bracelet from concert
preaches of love, harmony
life experiments

these emo glasses
once fun, distort, must revert
poke eye with plastic

your passion is great
channel it different, girl
be a role model

your cute little words
mowed down by reality
watch out for the shark

well then kentucky
my fears rest on your shoulders
will you disappoint

what to do, head? heart?
abandon security
live like song lyrics?

beware, devil fly
my rage will destroy you soon
patience and clipboard



11 Thoughts

  1. Christine says:

    All of those were awesome!

  2. sam says:

    these are excellent! so much in each one. i love haiku.

  3. vahnebe says:

    shit happens, wade through
    patience, determination
    it will all work out

  4. You’re a ninja.

    Or a genius.

    Or possibly both.

  5. erin says:

    This flattery will you get you all nowhere! =D

    But really. I think I’m going to have to do this again. Coming up haiku while angry is actually really entertaining. Much better than WAHWAHWAH posts.



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